In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Fast food is gaining its popularity around the globe. Because of the consumption of these junk food, people’s health is detreating tremendously, these days. Some people argue that government should impose a higher tax on such food. I agree that increased tax will restrain people from having unhealthy food.
There are obvious advantage of levying heavy tax on fast foods. First of all, there will be a reduction in consumption of such unhealthy food when there is an increase in the price. People will be compelled to choose cheaper option, which is will fit in their budget. Secondly, now, the price of healthy food will be less than that of fast food, people will automatically prefer such kind of food. This will bring improvement in people’s health.
However, there are also some serious disadvantages of implementing a higher tax on fast food. To begin with, first and foremost, high food price will affect the ordinary people’s budget. Fast food is consumed, for instance, when a person is in a hurry and have less time to spend on ordering food at a restaurant. Under such circumstances it will be impossible for that person to choose from a menu and wait for half an hour for food. Fast food joints are convenient food as there are easy to get without wasting time waiting. So, it is understood that these instant foods are unavoidable under certain circumstances. This increase in the cost will adversely affect the common man’s budget.
To conclude, although it is argued that the implementation of tax on unhealthy fast food will have a negative impact on people’s budget, I completely agree that higher tax will warn people from continues consumption of such junk food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05614035088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85369091916 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487719298246 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8284517663 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317368929 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130811582678 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681027494752 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238968258074 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547639282913 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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