In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian
diet.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
A healthy mind thrives in a healthy body, and for high fitness levels a balanced diet is mandatory. In many nations, the trend of using food which consists of vegetables is gaining popularity at a staggering rate among people. This essay will argue that despite their being the potential benefit of cost-effectiveness, the risk of malnutrition, leads people to a plight far outweighs any of the advantages it brings.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of a vegetarian diet in terms of cost-effectiveness because the soaring prices of meat products are unaffordable for many individuals. Nowadays, it is becoming difficult for masses to make both ends meet due to the inflation of prices, so they tend to adopt penny-pinching approach by preferring a vegan diet. For example, a survey report published in the Daily Times stated that due to high cost of food products 56% of people shift to vegetarian diet in order to save their hard-earned money.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages discussed above, the vegetarian diet is deprived of essential proteins that cause malnutrition. Non-vegetarian food is major source of protein that is the building block of body which is required for proper functioning of the body organs. In other words, this approach, in the long run causes several ailments such as anemia, deficiency of micronutrients, and bone deformities. For instance, child mortality rate in Africa is 84% because mothers are deficient in the protein diet, so the survival rate of newborn is low.
To conclude, simply relying on meals which consist of vegetables decreases the physical fitness levels of the body due to lack of a balanced diet far outweighs the benefit of saving money by cutting down protein enriched food which has several benefits. It is recommended that proper diet which is full of seven essential nutrients should be followed in order to maintain a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19677419355 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08212259792 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6810318143 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132019173204 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468316658168 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313716735685 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779388236879 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274555338004 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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