In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone now days than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Living in solitude is gaining a lot of popularity of late. In a few countries there is a growing trend of several individuals who prefer to exist all alone than in the prior times. I totally assert that this a negative trend, and in the essay I would further justify my claim through valid examples.
The most compelling reason in favour of living in company versus living alone comes with a sound reason of safety and security of an individual. In today’s times of an escalating crime rate to stay alone would simply seem to be an easy prey for burglars, swindlers, muggers and even killers. To illustrate, In India only in the recent times so many single old parents of children who are settled abroad are found brutally murdered or they have been assaulted citing them all alone in a vacant house seems an inviting proposition for such felons. So of late to take care of such lonely old people police constables are sent every week to check on their wellbeing.
Another crucial reason that comes to my mind regarding the negative factors of staying all by oneself, as it would be highly detrimental in case of major ill-health. Especially if a person is facing serious health issues like Depression, Dementia Cancer or even Arthritis and if he/she is not even in an ambulatory condition. Then he or she is left at the mercy of health professionals, who may take advantage of their situation and even ill-treat them. For instance, in many countries in Mexico where people out of choice have decided to stay unmarried, they often land up being all alone and facing a lot of loneliness related problems. However, of late government is taking sound measures to address this issue.
Living in company of a family, friends or even relatives can come with its own set of problems. Nevertheless, they even come with a plethora of advantage like companionship, bonding, safety, sharing, caring and the best of all is the feeling of belonging as well as feeling wanted.
To encapsulate, I would like to reiterate my faith in living in company is any day far better than living all alone for safety reasons and also to be taken care of by someone in times of dire need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74473684211 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66210063266 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563157894737 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.656893996 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128086117101 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438461700617 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329826042076 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770364079989 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365956169868 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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