In some countries more and more international travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists.
Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantage.
In many parts of the world, the tourism industry is blossoming at a very rapid pace. I believe it to be extremely beneficial not only in terms of cultural exchange, but also in terms of lowering unemployment rate. This essay will explore how these two mega-advantages have the potential to eclipse any drawbacks.
Tourism brings forth a lot of mega-merits. Firstly, this new trend facilitates the spread of culture across the border which is normally confined to countries. As nations do not have opportunity to introduce their culture to other nations, but tourism allows them to have this benefit. This fact can be better explained with an example of report related to sales of Italian attire, which revealed that the recent surge in popularity of Italian cloths has been attributed to boom of tourism industry.
Secondly, tourism facilitates countries in terms of creating more job opportunities for their nationals. As in these societies, international travel helps local residents to establish small business to earn their livelihood which in turn boost the employment rate of the country. Take an example of Japan where a recent survey revealed that the majority of locals in Qui Li are attached with tourist jobs. Hence, increased international travel has benefited societies in reducing the unemployment.
However, the only minor drawback that I can relate with this development is that at time the beauty of tourist spots is affected due to greater number of visitors, but this disadvantage is extremely rare and elusive and can be compensated, if the government shoulders the responsibility of maintenance of these places.
To sum up from above discussion, it can be concluded that the benefit of tourism especially in terms of expanding culture and facilitating the jobless people can easily overshadow the minor drawback related to the quality of the product.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2657807309 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99014396251 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7124435242 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154983091342 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541779781471 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619015230832 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739419434403 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758171321864 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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