In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it has been seen that a lot of citizens have guns and lethal weapons at home for their recreational activities, safety, and hobby. I completely concur with the belief that myriad of people dies because of gunshot worldwide every day. In this essay, I shall discuss the two primary demerits of owning a gun in the household; firstly, the children are susceptible to accident and secondly, the people are more likely to shoot in domestic fights.
To begin with, innumerable adolescents jeopardize their life when they get access to fatal guns at home. This is because, although, they are immature to handle such things yet inquisitive to know or to use it; in this case, they sometimes become the victim of an accident while playing and operating. For instance, in the USA, according to agencies, the rate of child death has been increased since last few years. Therefore, having guns at home is extremely risky if it has accessibility to young ones.
On the other hand, people kill family member out of acute rage, anger and jealous. When people in the family argue they get carried away in the spur of the moment and often cannot handle the heated arguments, wisely, in such circumstances many a time an individual kills the other person. Honor killing is the salient example of this type of situations, where a father kills their child or wife to save his dignity.
In conclusion, as aforementioned, I strongly agree with the facts that gun shooting have increased in the last decade in many countries due to its possession at home. Moreover, it is significantly evident with numerous data that having a gun at the house has several detrimental effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89788732394 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70659694642 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8265987715 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246513614117 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897853358335 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569105410543 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150825537322 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798357953809 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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