It is true that, manu countries people think that an owning a home Is more important for people rather than renting home. There are many reason which can be identified to account for this trendand ownership of home undoubtedly benefit from the staying rent house.
Why might this be the case? It happen for people need if they live their own house than it can be good for them because they do not need to give other money for their living. Furthermore, you can decorate your own house in your own decision. For example, you are an owner of a home then you are thinking to modernised your room and other things then you can develop your home no one could not tell you why you are paint or reconstruct your house. Moreover, you might be avail to staying in your own house whatever you want and you do not need to pay for your own house. Along with, you can save your money and this money they can use their other necessaries. Like, a owner of house he can buy dress, food and also go for travell with their own money the reason is he has not to pay for his own house. Besides, if you would your own landship then you do not need listen to others.
In my view, when a people stay a rent home that time they have to pay for their living on others home. Additionally, you can not live your ren home properly because you have to stay their cautiously. Such as, you would not singing loudly or you can not making a noise and also you might not be making a barbecue party with your friends if you want to doing this things then you have to get permission from your house owner. In addition, you would not paint your room in your own choice just because of your are live in others house. However, you might not be sure to living cause where you aee live now that is not might be longer for you. For Instance, you are staying Mr.X home last one year but recently Mr.X told you for moving other house because he want to move other country that's why he wanted to sale his home that time you will have not any choice. Besides ,you can not save your money reason is just giving the money for rent. Even, if any how you or your family members can do scratch in the wall than you have a headache for this how you might be avail to remove this or otherwise, your house owner will come and telling you unnecessary things what you would not expected.
To sum up, ownership of home and living in own house it is a good forf all people and it benefits for their daily life but renting house is not perfect for anyone because it might be cost able for everyone.so, i think own hone is important for everyone to maintain theur hole life and it helpful.
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- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for charity improving the neigbourhood or teaching sports to younger children to what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...ple rather than renting home. There are many reason which can be identified to account for ...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...use. Why might this be the case? It happen for people need if they live their own ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her money for their living. Furthermore, you can decorate your own house in your ...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...house in your own decision. For example, you are an owner of a home then you are ...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owner of a home then you are thinking to modernised your room and other things th...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...int or reconstruct your house. Moreover, you might be avail to staying in your ow...
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Line 3, column 670, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y can use their other necessaries. Like, a owner of house he can buy dress, food ...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...can use their other necessaries. Like, a owner of house he can buy dress, food a...
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Line 3, column 816, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not to pay for his own house. Besides, if you would your own landship then you ...
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Line 3, column 857, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... if you would your own landship then you do not need listen to others. In my v...
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Line 3, column 871, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to listen'?
Suggestion: to listen
...your own landship then you do not need listen to others. In my view, when a peopl...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed listen to others. In my view, when a people stay a rent home that time they...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y have to pay for their living on others home. Additionally, you can not live y...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir living on others home. Additionally, you can not live your ren home properly...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...others home. Additionally, you can not live your ren home properly because you ...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'sing', 'singe'
Suggestion: sing; singe
...heir cautiously. Such as, you would not singing loudly or you can not making a noise a...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would not singing loudly or you can not making a noise and also you might not be...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ould not singing loudly or you can not making a noise and also you might not be makin...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o doing this things then you have to get permission from your house owner. In ad...
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Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t might be longer for you. For Instance, you are staying Mr.X home last one year ...
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Line 5, column 682, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: X
... you. For Instance, you are staying Mr.X home last one year but recently Mr.X to...
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Line 5, column 719, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: X
...Mr.X home last one year but recently Mr.X told you for moving other house because...
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Line 5, column 764, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...d you for moving other house because he want to move other country thats why he want...
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Line 5, column 791, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...e because he want to move other country thats why he wanted to sale his home that tim...
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Line 5, column 875, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...me you will have not any choice. Besides ,you can not save your money reason is ju...
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Line 5, column 1103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht be avail to remove this or otherwise, your house owner will come and telling y...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for anyone because it might be cost able for everyone.so, i think own hone is im...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...it might be cost able for everyone.so, i think own hone is important for everyo...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t be cost able for everyone.so, i think own hone is important for everyone to ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my view, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 7.85571142285 369% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 88.0 24.0651302605 366% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 505.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22574257426 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0252847348 2.80592935109 72% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.394059405941 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2728759872 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.315789474 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5789473684 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372118674873 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164452870925 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910881310275 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284206472961 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561415479083 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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