Homeownership is the most issue among the public in a developed and developing country. Some people think that it is necessary to have a home rather than renting. This essay will explain this trend and give positive and negative feedback for this.
It is true that having a home living is part of the investment. When the money inflation takes over, people have to save by taking the option to save in low-risk stuff such as investing in homes and land. Furthermore, people can save more money by buying a home on their monthly/yearly budget compared to frequently paying for rent to landlords which is the cost of renting has the same amount as credit for a home in accumulation.
According to this trend, there are also positive and negative impacts of choosing for owning a home. In a positive view, increasing the number of homeownership in countries will reduce the number of homeless so that people can assure their basic needs. Then, people will not afraid if they have to lose their job and do not have money for rent. In contrast, as the number of homeownership increases, the number of free land spaces will be reduced that affect the rising price of land. For example, in Singapore, there are many people stay there without homeownership caused by land with expensive price. Therefore, people tend to stay in flats or apartments by renting.
In conclusion, although homeownership would be costly in the near future, this trend could lead to positive development because it is part of investment and this trend will reduce the number of homeless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86516853933 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71034278311 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535580524345 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.489105848 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242821625582 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092064181435 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894824281744 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133876418763 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779858336586 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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