In some countries people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of benefit. Some support this, others believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, unemployment is the most dangerous world-wide problem. In any state or country, the government is responsible for this situation. For example, the educated people are not employed according to their qualification. The payment paid by the government is an incentive for these people and they can use this money to their expenses till they get a good job. Sometimes the duration for unemployment is more than a year. Most of the places these types of activities carried out by employment exchanges.
In other words, this type of interim benefits may lead to make the people in a permanent unemployment situation and they may not attempt from their end for seeking the job. Majority of the people wish to start their employment in their native. Hence, they hesitate to migrate to other places for job.
In my opinion, this is not an final solution for controlling under employed situation in the country. This may cause an adverse effect on their mentality.To arrest this effectively, the government needs to increase the economic growth of the country. So that the young generation can serve the country in a better way. For example, during the education time the children should know about their course and their changes of getting employment. An awareness training needs to conducted by the education institutions and government as joint venture. As a result ,the people may take a vice decision on their carrier after completing the graduation
For example, after completing the graduation, the students are waiting long time for employment or they forced to migrate other countries for employment. This situation could be avoided by these type of government initiations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21978021978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88074221049 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520146520147 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1269109362 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139040235169 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503737145355 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352510685954 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949403138247 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00913468249139 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.