In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.
Nowadays people are more aware of getting a real life experience. In some countries, young people prefers to gain a real world experience for a year between their courses either by working or by exploring new places. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages for those people who are decided to do so.
Most young people are now going for a work or a trip between their finishing high school and starting university studies. They would like to spend a year like this. Students or young people can gain a lot of experience from the real world which is worth. Because, when studying, one can only gain knowledge from books or tutors and they will not get much exposure to what is in the real world. They might be unaware. This will certainly boost their career. From doing like this, one can improve their self confidence and also can learn to stay independent. If people are willing to work for a year, , then they can get an experience from the choosen industry and also will be able to earn. Even some people would earn money for their university studies that they are going to do. Therefore, a year left for work or travel will not be a waste.
On the other hand, when students or young people spend a year for travel or work between their studies, they might be a year back when compared to other people who are resuming their studies. Even though, people get experiences from work or travel, there is a chance of getting less interested in their higher studies. Sometimes they might get defocused when they start to earn money or explore different cultures. Hence, some students or young people would not prefer this.
This essay discussed both advantages and disadvantages for young people or students who would prefer to go to work or travel in between their courses for a year. In short, there are a lot of advantages, but we must be aware of not getting defocused from higher studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, even so, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66863905325 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39462987233 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440828402367 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4763603101 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0526315789 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467469119597 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165797827566 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147825684212 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352211619629 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489339739769 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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