Some employers believe that job applicants' social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
<p class="MsoNormal">In modern society, Qualification has given utmost importance.
Any person who is willing to apply for a job should be qualified enough to
handle job responsibilities. Whereas on the other hand, social skills played a
crucial role in one’s career. In this essay we discuss the arguments on academic-qualification
over social skills. </p><p class="MsoNormal">Today’s world is modern, and technology is unconventional,
and this booming growth of technology also increases the need of people who
understand the new tools and methods. Academic qualification is required to get
deep acquaintance of these because a literate person with qualification notches
will have better understanding of technology than an illiterate person. Moreover,
it is quite practical, personal with good qualification will help a corporation
in a better way to grow and establish their business. </p><p class="MsoNormal">On the other hand, Social skills also plays vigorous role as
it generates those ideas from an individual which doesn’t persist in a person
with academic qualification. For instance, a recent study offered by BBC shows
people who have more social skills are evidenced to be lucrative for corporate
world because they found to be more innovative. </p><p class="MsoNormal">In my Opinion, when it comes to argue on Academic-qualification
or Social skills which one is better, I would say a person should pertain both
attributes. It is necessary to attain academic-qualification to understand the
fundamental laws of life. Hence, one should have academic qualification as well
as focus on attaining social skills for better opportunities. </p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05668016194 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.9923181823 2.80592935109 178% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599190283401 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7546061519 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155877012336 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669238908379 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323843039254 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547582304056 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330316538859 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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