.Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
It is true that nourishment of children in a proper way needs a lot of effort and care. Parents should prepare them to face this competitive world at early stage only. Therefore, few amounts of experts believe that teaching foreign language at elementary school than secondary is beneficial for their future. In my opinion benefits of this notion outnumbered it's drawback.
To embark on, there are several reasons which contributes this factor. Firstly, at early stage children's brain is very active, their grasping power to learn anything is comparable very high. This would be the ideal scenario to make them aware of these skills. Also, when children are in primary school they have curious attitude, they want to know everything and show interest in learning. Apart from that, due to lack of ego they will not hesitate to make mistakes and rectify them. Secondary, nowadays to make your mark professional you need to entail extraordinary talent. If a person has command over some foreign languages, it goes effortlessly for them to communicate globally. Additionally, linguistic skills act as a ship which can take you ahead in this cut throat competitive world.
Moreover, every coin has reverse side also. Schools have already occupied them in study and co curricular activities whole day. They hardly get spare time to perform any other task. At this younger age where they need to spend time in activities related to play, imposing them to learn some extra skills is kind of burden and pressure for them. Furthermore, sometimes it becomes arduous for them to manage all this, and it results in physical and mental exhaustion.
In my conclusion I would say that knowing some foreign language will always act as a feather in cap. However, parents should consider capability and academic burden of their child before involving them in such activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...It is true that nourishment of children in a proper way needs a lot of effort and care. Parents...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... Moreover, every coin has reverse side also. Schools have already occupied them in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, apart from, kind of, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09803921569 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6524998546 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0145855587 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1052631579 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247542342368 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636253397059 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725288150176 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148468075866 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818066027686 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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