some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Everyone loves to watch movies and it is a most significant source of entertainment across the globe however, with the passes of time the pattern of watching movies has also changed. Advancement of technology has brought comfort of watching cinema at our home. Inspite of getting comfort most of the people still prefer watching movies in cinema hall. Both the views have their pros and cons. With proper consideration of both the views i would like to explicate my thoughts in this paragraph.
Firstly, watching films in cinema hall has its own charm that can not be replaced by any other method. The work of actors and the way movies are presented can only be enjoyed or appreciated if one watch that on big screen. There are many people who appreciate this art without thinking of spending their money in cinemas. Also, nowadays everyone is running after their jobs they don't get enough time to spend with their family. Going out and watching movies in theatre is a kind of change for them. Additionally, they get relaxed after spending whole week at work, and those few hours charge them to start a new week. Furthermore, watching movies in cinema hall provide employment to number of people, as well as most of the individual's whole business is depended upon this source only. When we buy tickets and other stuff in theatre any how we contribute to the country's economy growth. Movies are made to be watched in cinema halls only however, latest technology development has changed its viewer basis.
Moreover, apart from multiple edges of watching it in big medium, most of the people prefer to watch it at home. The main key reason of this phenomenon is being cost effective. For instance, multiplexes charge handsome amount of money for tickets, and the food court inside the cinema hall it self is very expensive. Overall you spend a good amount of money when you step out to watch that in cinema hall. Additionally, the luxury and comfort that your home can bring to you can't be brought outside. Also, there are so many OTT platforms are available such as, Netflix and Amazon Prime. They provide huge collection of movies that can be seen on your phone or laptop without any break or interference.In addition to this, one of the most interesting factor about this OTT platform that compel people to watch movies at home is you can watch the same movie multiple times according to your time preference. Time constrain also contributes to the idea of watching movies at home.
To conclude my essay i would say that watching films at home saves a lot of expenses and you can enjoy the same movie within your budget. However, having so many advantages of watching at home i believe that movies are meant to be watched in big screen only.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eryone is running after their jobs they dont get enough time to spend with their fam...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...comfort that your home can bring to you cant be brought outside. Also, there are so ...
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Suggestion: In
...aptop without any break or interference.In addition to this, one of the most inter...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75523012552 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47928075027 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493723849372 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8272867202 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7083333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168281772161 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562553751461 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048411792348 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114490112254 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170214542432 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 438, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... proper consideration of both the views i would like to explicate my thoughts in ...
^
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eryone is running after their jobs they dont get enough time to spend with their fam...
^^^^
Line 3, column 947, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
... be watched in cinema halls only however, latest technology development has changed its ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es of watching it in big medium, most of the people prefer to watch it at home. T...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...d the food court inside the cinema hall it self is very expensive. Overall you spend a ...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...comfort that your home can bring to you cant be brought outside. Also, there are so ...
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Line 5, column 703, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...aptop without any break or interference.In addition to this, one of the most inter...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ovies at home. To conclude my essay i would say that watching films at home s...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... so many advantages of watching at home i believe that movies are meant to be wat...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75523012552 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47928075027 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493723849372 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8272867202 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7083333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168281772161 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562553751461 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048411792348 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114490112254 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170214542432 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.