You have been invited to give a talk at a local community college in America about your home country. Write a letter to the secretary of the college. In your letter
accept the invitation and offer a possible date for the talk
summarise what information you will include in the talk
say what equipment you will need the college to arrange for you to give the talk
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
I am writing this to inform you that please consider this as my humble acceptance for your invitation. I am great full to you for recognising my work and giving me a chance to share information about my home country. I would be happy to join you all on 24th November, it would be easier for me if you organise that on this date. I assume that I will not be available after that, as I am travelling for some official work.
I would like to present a brief summery of my view points related to talk. I will discuss diverse nature of my country which makes it unique. Multiple factors related to agriculture will be included. As well as, I would speak about it's great history and what other technological developments are being done. Although my main focus will be to make everyone aware abut the cultural beauty of my county, which will be the key factor.
I will entail some technological support for my presentation. I request you to kindly arrange a projector for better view of slides . Also, I don't want any inconvenience related to my audibility so, please provide good quality mike. Hopefully you will consider my request.
I am really thank full for you giving me this opportunity.
Looking forward for more associations like this.
Yours Faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hare information about my home country. I would be happy to join you all on 24th ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r me if you organise that on this date. I assume that I will not be available aft...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... travelling for some official work. I would like to present a brief summery o...
^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mery of my view points related to talk. I will discuss diverse nature of my count...
^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...evelopments are being done. Although my main focus will be to make everyone aware abut the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ge a projector for better view of slides . Also, I dont want any inconvenience rel...
^^
Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tor for better view of slides . Also, I dont want any inconvenience related to my au...
^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thanked'.
Suggestion: thanked
...ill consider my request. I am really thank full for you giving me this opportunity...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78222222222 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77215832423 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8192471401 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161599788079 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060486750492 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049658139502 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873370630022 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583248788889 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.