Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience
Nowadays, advertisers utilize immoral and inappropriate techniques to advert products and services. I personally believe some methods are not acceptable which will explain my reasons in the following.
To begin with, the main goal of numerous advertisements is persuading offspring to purchase some goods including junk food. Unfortunately, such foods are not healthy and nutritious for children. However, children are not enough mature to differentiate between bad and good things. Therefore, they force their parents to provide those commodities. Moreover, some commercial programs do not have appropriate concepts for young adults. For instance, companies might apply some approaches including smoking or drinking alcohol to make their programs attractive. Disappointedly, cognitive developments have not been completed in teenagers and children. Because of this, some of them might imitate those advertisements and consequently hurt themselves.
To solve these issues, some modalities can be considered. Firstly, the authorities should not allow advertising agency to advert unhealthy and detrimental commodities for young adults. In fact, the government must confirm those products to do not have side effect for children health. Moreover, inappropriate techniques for inciting children ought to be restricted. To give an example, in adverts related to children, hero characters should not smoke cigarette or drink alcohol.
To conclude, in today’s competitive world, companies have a right to introduce their products and encourage individuals to select their goods. However, as young audiences have not been maturely developed, the adverts for this group ought to be made in an ethical and acceptable way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... made in an ethical and acceptable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90763052209 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15537443106 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630522088353 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6523228971 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5294117647 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135563986502 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430800481796 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297211827234 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814815423285 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226235503522 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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