Some movies are designed to make people think. Others are purely to entertain. What type of movies do you prefer?
Movies play a vital role on influencing the people in the society where a few are message oriented and other are purely to entertaining. I prefer both depending on my state of mind.
To begin with, movies which convey a good social message or values in them are always heart-touching. They have a major impact on people to pursue great things in their lives if it is properly taken. One great movie I could refer here is “The pursuit of happiness” in which the role played by Will Smith was out-standing. This movie shows the ups and downs in his life balancing between his focus to achieve something in share market and his family relationships in which he had to take care of his little son who is in play school. This movie could be a great example to show how success follows with hard work.
On the other hand, the question is “Do you think only the movies with a message in them rule the box office? I would say no! For a long run in theater it should definitely be a commercial movie. For an example, Avengers is a movie franchise released from marvel comics and it got a series of movies in which all the movies are worldwide entertainers with filling the pockets of the producers. The reason behind this is due to the majority of the audience who choose entertainment over the others. In addition there are many genres available just to entertain people and even kids while it has become best source of relaxation for all ages. Some movies could be completely logic less and still tastes the great success at box office by just entertaining people.
To conclude, like a sugar coated pill, a message can be delivered with added humor in it. I would strongly recommend that both are required equally and with a balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59935897436 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5994972931 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6027646469 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269555690893 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080306707343 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734322403536 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144577927176 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101794692696 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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