Some older people struggle with the use of modern electronic technology such as smartphones, computers. What are the reasons and give your solutions.
Old days are gone, technology is spread all over the continents. People rely on modern electronics, that changed their way of living and became easier. But old people are facing difficulties in managing with such technology like smartphones and computers. There are some reasons why elderly guys are struggling and solutions must be found, in order to help them how to use this new technology.
Many reasons that led old people to struggle with the latest technology. First, they were raised in a century where technology was not discovered well, it was only used for big factories and rarely or for army. Second, old people will face difficulties to learn fast and get use to technology, since it is complicated and demand concentration from the person in order to memorize the steps to know how to use it. For example, when we bought new smart mobile for our parents, they did not recognize how to work on it, it was something developed for people at their age, where they were born and lived in a different lifestyle.
On the other hand, many solutions can be found to help old people to cop with modern technology and familiar with it. First, in each family there is one young person, that might help his old parents and teach them how to use the smartphone or computers, but they must be patient and try to find an easy way to explain ho this smart technology work. However, technology centers must provide short courses or sessions for old people, to help them on how to use smartphones or computers, with affordable prices, or the council of each city or town can make free courses yearly. For example, in our town in Lebanon, a non-governmental organization, each year arrange a free technology training for the old people in town, where it help them on how to be friendly users with the technology.
As a conclusion, technology these days become an important part in our lives. Old people struggle with the use of it unlike the young generation. Therefore, there must be a solution to assist those old people to get use to technology, at least to know the basics of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
... people will face difficulties to learn fast and get use to technology, since it is ...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ng for the old people in town, where it help them on how to be friendly users with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71038251366 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69113893947 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0187378149 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256751943878 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111481378436 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681946577061 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189201706993 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627412065214 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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