Children are the tender buds of the nation and how they should be raised, is a debatable issue. While some parents believe that childcare centres are the best way which can offer good services to raise an infant, others opine that grandparents can take good care of them. However, I think that both the arguments have their own equal upsides which will be discussed in this essay.
Admittedly, childcare institutions provide many benefits. First and foremost, from the Guardian perspective, nowadays, all the parents are working to earn bread and butter for their families. Furthermore, they have hectic schedules due to longer working hours, so they find that childcare academies are the effective way which can help them for the uprising of their child. Moreover, these institutions not only help from the security point of view but try to engage a pre-nursery child through numerous activities. Therefore, children of same age groups find it cheerful place, resulting in overcoming the burden of the parents.
On the contrary, family members such as grandparents share the inbound love with their grandchildren. They know how to raise them because of their number of experiences. Another significant argument in favor is that family people can take good care of their kids by different means such as by feeding nutritious food on time, taking them to play with other kids in parks, etc. Thus, a child feels not only warm in their hands but can also learn true values of life. This method of childcare helps to inculcate moral values more effectively.
In conclusion, both the discussed arguments have their own positive aspects. In my opinion, the upbringing of a child by their family members such as grandparents has more advantages in terms of safety and unconditional love shared with their kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to true'
Suggestion: to true
... warm in their hands but can also learn true values of life. This method of childcar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10437710438 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69916093197 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9984691098 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310864622132 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871121879342 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526325998647 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1750518207 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459397201565 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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