The role of old and young employees towards organizations is inescapable and significant.it is claimed by some individuals that older workers are most useful to a firm.while,ohers including me consider that, youngsters are superior as compared to the old ones. Both the view aspects will be articulated in the upcoming essay. It is noteworthy to mention that, elderly employees often have extraordinary work capabilities according to some people. The main reason behind this is that, old workers have experience regarding their job which sometimes provide huge benefits to companies.for instance, according to a survey, experienced employees give big contribution to an business firm as much as owners of company and nearly forty five percent companies achieve financial advantages under the superior co- operation of senior old workers in india.the another essential point is , older employees frequently tackle every serious financial situation with patience in an appropriate way which make the atmosphere better for work in an organization. Hence, these points are considerable and make the employees useful for a company. Paradoxically, apart from the favor of old workers,young employees are constantly prove good as well according to a host of people. The main point is that, youngsters often have better academic qualifications which suited for every job.for example, Young workers can every work efficiently and this way open the door for further creativity with modern thought patterns and great achievements can lead by this in an business. The other point is, young employees can use technological methods in business due to having knowledge about modernization expansion as compared to the old ones. Therefore, these ways of work are prove youngsters appropriate for organization. In conclusion, after throwing light on above discussion,I personally consider that,old employees are better in their position.however, young workers are the constant need of current world ,in field of business due the modern thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60586319218 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.221595715 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.11903234 49.4020404114 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.1 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104203572985 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536518128431 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365836729239 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104203572985 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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