Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
Many people hold the opinion of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops whenever there is a new release from the manufacturers while some other people see this as a bad idea and continue to use the old one that they are using at present. In this essay, I will explain both views and discuss my opinion hereafter.
On the one hand, purchasing of new gadgets, phones or laptops is a good idea. It let us have access to sophisticated and easy to use electronics. Furthermore, most of the new gadgets usually come with a new update and new application, making communication easier and make life more comfortable.
On the other hand, there are a lot of disadvantages to purchasing new gadgets, phones or laptops. These ranges from wasting of money, isolation from and friends, health-related issues and lot more. The money for buying new electronics can be well spent on some other important things. For instance, the money can be used for charity purpose such as a donation to the needy people or construction of the religious houses.
Purchasing of new electronics can hurt someone’s health such as the ray of light of the electronics directly into the owner’s eye, body pain and sometimes lack of sleep. This occurs because the mind and soul that are directly attached to the new gadgets making the owner’s attention to be shifted away from other important things.
In conclusion, buying new gadgets, phones or laptops is a good thing only if someone doesn’t have access to the old gadget or someone don’t have one before. Remember that, there are a lot of people who need one thing or the other in the world, spend wisely on them instead of purchasing new electronics when you have one before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87414965986 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84927650507 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5136105847 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280086030586 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098572667293 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755366137245 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15597008613 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888280670155 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.