It is argued by some that the death penalty benefits a nation. I completely agree with this statement. Because, it is an effective means to reduce crime, and less money would spend on jail sector as well as society would be more safer. However, it sometimes goes wrong.
The most significant plus point of the highest punishment is that it is an effective deterrent to serious crime. This is because, it instils fear of carrying out serious crimes as people would not want to lose their life as a result of that. For example, people who are thinking of murder or committing violent acts will think hundred times before doing so. As a result of this policy, crime rate would go down.
Another compelling reason is that the cost of jail would be reduced. When a criminal caught after committing a crime, he have to taken into a prison to give sentence. The expenditure of his jail life such as food, clothing, and accommodation have to be provided through jail authorities and those money comes from government. If a criminal punished for his entire life, the cost of his prison life have to be given by government. Nonetheless, provided that the punishment of the offenders is death, the government would not have to pay for his living. As a result, this should reduce the cost of imprisonment gradually.
On the other hand, sometimes the capital punishment might go wrong. In some cases, it is noticeable that the punishment go for wrong person who are not involved in any crime. For example, in the last year, the supreme court of Bangladesh declared death punishment for three criminals, where one of the accused criminal have not done anything. Consequently, the family of the victim suffer from and without doing nothing a life went away.
To conclude, I agree that the death punishment is better for a region as it is a measure of reducing crime and saving expenditure of government. Nonetheless, it may cause harm for family to punishing wrong person.
- Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic? 73
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages 11
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 62
- The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.What are the causes of this continued rise?Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity? 73
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...jail sector as well as society would be more safer. However, it sometimes goes wrong. T...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...r or committing violent acts will think hundred times before doing so. As a result of t...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...nal caught after committing a crime, he have to taken into a prison to give sentence...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...e provided through jail authorities and those money comes from government. If a criminal pu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81120943953 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69004553259 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6617843443 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.55 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180024446329 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563857087972 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488716316712 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109143911297 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489897619593 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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