All over the world, people are moving from one place to another place. Now, some might think, it is appropriate to set up a new, small and separate residential area for better adjustment. However, I do not agree with this notion completely because I strongly believe that the benefits of assimilating into the local culture far outweigh any negative repercussions.
To embark upon, it is extremely significant to have good contacts with the local residents. It is because, living in a new realm is quite difficult and even to aline with the that milieu as well but if you have some good regional friends then they will always help you by guiding you and by providing things to you. I can prove this view point by giving an example of one of my doctor friends. She wanted to pursue her post graduation from a reputed medical college in New York for which she needed few letters of recommendation. But deplorably she did not know anyone very well there. Thus, she could not meet their demand and failed to get admission.
On the contrary, it can not be denied that living with one's own people is very convenient too. It is due to the inevitable fact that a particular group of people have a slew of things in common such as food habits, festivals and most importantly customs. Hence, it is indeed feasible to get adjusted in such surrounding swiftly. For example, in America most of the Sikhs stay altogether in a specific domain merrily. This shows that this kind of adaptation also works fine.
To elucidate, I firmly endorse my point of view that acquiring a new culture not only ensures the assistance from the local people but it will also enhance the knowledge and wisdom by exchanging the ideas from each other. Additionally, it will make the bonding stonger between two different groups and thus reduce the chances of dispute. By reinforcing peace and harmony, we will definitely make our planet a better place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iate to set up a new, small and separate residential area for better adjustment. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73372781065 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62285073179 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612426035503 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8810190571 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1176470588 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150742860293 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382707573579 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409054939031 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817637724169 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233072268788 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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