Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this rapidly changing world, which demands everyone a lot of money to keep up with the up-to-date things, there is a question asking us everyday: “Whether enjoyable jobs or jobs with a high salary leads to a better life”. Some people argue it’s better to get an enjoyable job, while others enjoy a job with a high salary. In the following essay, I will discuss both views and explain the reasons why I think a job with a high salary outweighs that of an enjoyable one.
On the one hand, there is much controversy about searching for jobs with decent salaries. Firstly, the cost of living nowadays is very expensive, which requires people to get jobs offering high salaries in order to serve their daily necessities like mortgages, food. Moreover, when people have a high salary, they can purchase whatever they want, which satisfies their increasing needs. For instance, they will go on a holiday at a five-star resort, eat in famous restaurants, or own luxurious cars like Mercedes, BMW... In terms of family, people can ensure that their children will receive high quality education and medical care which help them prepare better for their future life.
On the other hand, we all know that we spend most of our lifetime for working. Perhaps you will find your work brings you a wealthy life and it makes you reach your happiness, it might not be enough. Example, a girl wakes up and starts a day with a lot of questions about her job such as: “What will I do today? why do I need to do that job? do I really like what I am doing?”. After 1 week, she chose to quit her job and find another job she liked. The new job may not bring her a lot of money but it makes her wake up with a lot of energy.
In conclusion, both enjoyable jobs and jobs with a high salary will bring you advantages and disadvantages. In the hustle and bustle of daily life, individuals should consider the merits of the two choices to balance their life. In the future, people have a tendency of choosing a job with a good salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Suggestion: Why
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Suggestion: Do
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the two choices to balance their life. In the future, people have a tendency of c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52316076294 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44933212342 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550408719346 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0501767882 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270829314453 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864281699221 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748717002716 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174861139065 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924151728749 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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