Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different perspectives concerning the goal of university education. While it is sometimes thought that it prepares graduates for better employment, I am inclined to believe that it has vast advantages for both individuals and the community.
One the one hand, there are two principal reasons why some people may claim that tertiary education can assist people to get well-paid jobs. First and foremost, it arms students with the knowledge and skills needed by the job market. In other words, if they were not equipped with these skills which are demanded by the market, they would hold less chance to become high-paid employees. A second cause is that graduate degree holders may have a better opportunity of promotion. For example, the majority of companies take the educational level as a factor for higher positions promotion.
One the other hand, I would side with those who believe that universities offer enormous individual and societal benefits. Initially, by pursuing higher studies, people learn to be more responsible and self-dependent. This is because of the prohibitively high tuition fees, leading students to work part-time in order to pay these fees. An additional point is that university education can result in economic growth. That is to say, the more educated and skilled people the country has, the more investment it can pour into its economy. For instance, the gigantic IT companies invested billions of dollars in India due to the abundance of IT graduates there.
In conclusion, despite the better employment and promotion an individual can gain from tertiary education, I hold the notion that it has broad advantages to both individuals and society because it can help individuals to become self-reliant and can boost the economy. For the prosperity of the nation, It is hoped that authorities encourage youth to pursue a university education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29801324503 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90878726883 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7264329099 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289513503565 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083332262238 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589517418043 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172909665081 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454545331922 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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