there is an argument that ,whether the goal of institutes is to help scholars to get good posts or it also advantageous to individuals and society .while scholars become skilled by getting education from institute ,this essay believes that getting higher education developes social mobility and cohension which are additional advantages of university education.
on the one hand ,the main reason that how scholars become skillfull as they get graduate level education is that there are vast number of courses available in graduation which demands mental practice and needs active brain .by doing mental practice regularly students brain become enough skilled that requires in higher jobs .as a result graduates regularly receives job letters from international companies .to examplify ,a survey conducted by an american university showed that people,who take higher education from university,become more succesfull in their life by 70 % as compared to those who didn't take.
on the other hand,the major reason that how higher education developes social mobility and cohension is that an educated person always try to build up social relationship with individuals and with their neighbourers ,this is because as students attend different class about social violence and relationships so they developes positive mindedness,resulting in development of social relationships, mobility and cohension .to examplify ,a report prepared by an australian scientist showed that 89% of students who completed their graduation plays an important role in building up social relationships ,peace and mobility as compared to others.
to conclude, provided education in university make scholars skillfull which help in their jobs but other benefits of higher education overlaps it .
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...benefits of higher education overlaps it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, of course, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76045627376 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09129164196 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.617172745 49.4020404114 406% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.75 106.682146367 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.75 20.7667163134 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242304645248 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182253286465 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906671798906 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182253286465 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906671798906 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 13.0946893788 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.02 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there is an argument that ,whether the goal o...
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Suggestion: ,
there is an argument that ,whether the goal of institutes is to hel...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... advantageous to individuals and society .while scholars become skilled by getting...
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...lled by getting education from institute ,this essay believes that getting higher ...
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...vantages of university education. on the one hand ,the main reason that how ...
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...versity education. on the one hand ,the main reason that how scholars become...
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...s mental practice and needs active brain .by doing mental practice regularly stude...
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...ugh skilled that requires in higher jobs .as a result graduates regularly receives...
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...job letters from international companies .to examplify ,a survey conducted by an a...
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...om international companies .to examplify ,a survey conducted by an american univer...
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...n american university showed that people,who take higher education from university,b...
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...ho take higher education from university,become more succesfull in their life by 70 % a...
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...r life by 70 % as compared to those who didnt take. on the other hand,the major...
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... who didnt take. on the other hand,the major reason that how higher education ...
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... individuals and with their neighbourers ,this is because as students attend diffe...
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...ps so they developes positive mindedness,resulting in development of social relationships,...
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...al relationships, mobility and cohension .to examplify ,a report prepared by an au...
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...ps, mobility and cohension .to examplify ,a report prepared by an australian scien...
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...role in building up social relationships ,peace and mobility as compared to others...
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Suggestion: To
...d mobility as compared to others. to conclude, provided education in univers...
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Suggestion: .
...benefits of higher education overlaps it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, of course, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76045627376 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09129164196 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.617172745 49.4020404114 406% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.75 106.682146367 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.75 20.7667163134 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242304645248 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182253286465 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906671798906 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182253286465 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906671798906 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 13.0946893788 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.02 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.