Aviation is one of the known causes of air pollution. Aircrafts being heaviest among the other transport modes, work on carbon based fuels and emit greenhouse gases such as Carbon Dioxide(CO2) which is a key cause behind global warming. However, In my opinion the view of some people that because air travel causes serious pollution, therefore air travel should be reduced is not correct, I do not agree with it for multiple reasons which will be highlighted in this essay.
Air travel has increased over the years, and will continue to grow with increase in population and growing vocational, tourism and trade opportunities around the globe. The reason of pollution is not the travel, but the carbon based fuel, aircraft infrastructure and travel strategy. The aircrafts are large and require more energy to power the descend, climb and to stay afloat in the year. The larger the aircraft the more the fuel requirement.
The greenhouse gases released in the air at higher altitudes remain in the air for longer and thereby cause heating of the atmosphere for longer time and impact ozone layer too. The alternatives can be to work on biofuels that are less harmful or work on revamping aircraft that consume less fuels. Until the suitable alternatives such as solar battery or electric batteries or biofuels are not tested and approved by Aviation regulatory bodies, travel strategies can be reviewed in order to optimize fuel consumption. These require research, development and long term investment, while in parallel travel type can be revamped.
Travels that require multiple stop and long-haul flights consume much more fuel, compared to short air travel travel. Hence air travel that require longer fleeting time, can be relooked at. Wherever the alternative sources are available, such as travel within the country, ,citizens should use public transport to optimize consumption of fuels. The world seem to be coming together to limit the global warming, for example, the Paris climate agreement considers carbon emission effects too. Hence one can assume that efforts are underway to revamp current aviation industry too.
To sum up, air travel needs to continue in the interest of business, world economy and prosperity of the world. However, like any industry it needs to evolve in order to add value and reduce its harmful impact. This requires working on alternative and renewable energy creation so that effects of global warming are reduced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... large and require more energy to power the descend, climb and to stay afloat in the year. ...
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...longer time and impact ozone layer too. The alternatives can be to work on biofuels...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun fuels is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...work on revamping aircraft that consume less fuels. Until the suitable alternatives ...
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...e much more fuel, compared to short air travel travel. Hence air travel that require longer f...
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... effects of global warming are reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19849246231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59833133455 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545226130653 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3392911478 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.894736842 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27317933623 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787999662256 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754942630037 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148602499757 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723959012446 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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