Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hardwork and practice can make you successful.discuss both views and give your opinion.
people can succeed in different fields and it depends on their ability to confront the dreadful situations they encounter in their life.However,sports,games of athletes, is an exceptional case where diligent and practice cannot be overlooked.it is argued by some that inborn talents are required to achieve a triumph in sports.i believe that hardwork and practice are more important than natural ability.
Having analysed the life of many eminent personalities in sports, it is clear that many of them was not likely to be born with gifted abilities.Neverthless,their immense dedication as well as passion which enable them to achieve the coveted feet in this cut-throat era.Dhoni,a famous Indian cricket player,who had worked as a ticket seller before he joined the cricket team.consequently,his continuous hard work and love to the profession brings name and fame to the country.Besides,they are obliged to engage in physical activities regularly in order to keep physically fit which in turn help them to play well,so,it not only requires hard work but also regular practice is inevitable.
Innate abilities have tremendous influence on success while regular practice along with it is mandatory.if people with inborn capabilities did not workout properly they would not succed.Furthermore,dedicated talented people from destitute family are likely to exhibit their caliber much better than those who trained professionally for long period.
Overall,the role of natural ability is incredible,but talent without practice is fruitless.As such,practice and diligence on a regular basis is unavoidable to reap the harvest in this glittering field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72764227642 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93112971273 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662601626016 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.881174376 49.4020404114 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.25 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 20.7667163134 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.25 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129404574455 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852046460273 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497705831754 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852046460273 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497705831754 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.36 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.93 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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