Some people believe that charity organizations should be help people wherever they live, others think they should attend their countries only.Discuss both and give your opinion
In the modern era, an increasing concern for many people around the world is obviously the poverty.Despite of the wealthy countries there are a lot of different of poor countries and society.Furthermore, one part of volunteers which is leaving in the developed countries supporting to this people.However, the people divided to 2 different section about this idea.In this essay I will examine both side of arguments and provide will my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, each government have to be meet the requirements to their community.This basic requirements should be covered of accommodation, provide healthy system without charge, education and security. This definition is social government.Furthermore, just helping the certain group of people is not equal for humanity. Therefore, some developed countries, when reducing the their unhealthy conditions for people they be able to help other countries on the world. Some charity establishment is supporting to this idea. For example, in the Turkey government provide the equal life for Africa. Constantly, the people in the Turkey saving money for funding, collect to basic foods and second hand or new clothes and sending toward country. And also, secondly this establishment calling the people around the world such as a doctor, teacher.Within this individuals the people which in living the poor countries might be find the some vital assist.Furthermore, with this helping the each person could be learn the how they are lucky relevant to their life. For illustration, the young people such as a child or student be able learn to how becoming good person.These are obviously, positive side for the all society on the world.
Another view of opinion for this issue, some part of people believing to each establishment must be provide to help for their peoples. They claims this people becoming more and more lazy with this helps. For illustration, the homeless people, we don’t have to help this people. Instead of this help we could be find the job for this people. Likely, they could be improve their self by this way. Therefore, Such as an Africa, why we should send to food? Instead of this charity we can teach to them for agriculture.
In conclusion, I partially agree the both sides of arguments. However, obviously it’s not meaning to we shouldn’t stop the sending some basic affairs.Moreover, we can increase the education with other charity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30154639175 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22751527851 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.146545055 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.277777778 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259151609552 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911345389169 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069174706726 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148150346147 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747333544743 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.