Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time
Nowadays it is often assumes that kids are given too much leisure time and that they should use this time to engage in more school work. On my opinion, kids should spend their free time on other activities and not necessarily school work. For one, this essay will discuss playing with friends and for another, watching educative cartoons as other important activities they can partake in as these are equally required for their social and cognitive development.
In the first place, playing with peers enables children to learn how to interact socially and understand language better. For example, University of Ibadan found in a recent study that children whose parents allowed to visit community playhouse during childhood handle relationshipbetter than children that jumped from one academic coaching to another. Though the latter were academically sound but socially deficient.
In the second place, educative cartoons does not only amuse kids but also teach them vocabularies and some important moral lessons that will help them to navigate the world of war. For example, I learnt to be proactive in whatever I do from Tom and Jerry cartoon, and this has helped me in some ways. The vocabularies learnt from cartoons can also be integrated in the school work and boost their academic performances
To sum up, kids should not spent all their time on reading and writing but should also their peers and watch intelligent cartoons because this will help their personality development and make them a total child
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, for example, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19028340081 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6308625621 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2414749034 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.444444444 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328150263004 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133234436952 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1347015188 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17255124043 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1047862244 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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