Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more than school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time
While it is true that student In learning institutions, have been granted too much leisure time. They feel that this period can be used to engage in more academic pursuit. I think students need more spare time, to deal with other personal stuffs than putting all emphasis on learning. The aim of this essay is to discuss some reason opposing to the above given notion.
Firstly, leisure time is essential for all students at different level. It serve as period student assimilate of digest whatever they have been taught, in their various institutions. Most importantly, students need time to shake off the stress if learning and engage in some recreational activities, such as indoor or outdoor games. Furthermore, some student have some special talents and skills which are quite different from academic studies, which need more time to put such skills into constant practice.
Another point to consider is the need for student to involve in some vocational jobs, and to take part in different vocational trips. As we all know, travelling they say is part of education, different educational trips should also be put into consideration such as visit to the zoo, national museums, national art galleries and to allow them engaged in some personal discoveries. For an example students need time to make research on their career path, before diving into any career they may choose.
In conclusion, student have to be granted more leisure time by their various institutions and under close observation by their parent, to guide and direct them to make use of their free time reasonably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'serves'?
Suggestion: serves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10687022901 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64258888836 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4918413171 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262621409003 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100713288708 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550452646787 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180199715716 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655030589964 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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