It is often argued that youngsters should pick up some education learning activities during the leisure time rather than indulging other useless activities.However,the idea does seems plausible but I would argue that the evidence put forward by proponents of this viewpoint is unconvincing and inherently flawed.
There are manifold points which support my view.First and foremost,parents need to allow their child to pick up the hobby according to their interest as this trend would motivate and help them to feel confident and stress free in their lives.Moreover,Other outdoor activities like sports and hanging out with other kids may help child to feels fit and strong physically.On a particular note,teenagers also need to develop other skills rather than intellectual skills for better growth of the brain.A survey conducted by times of india, has revealed that 45 percent of children are under pressure of studies as they are not doing any of the out door activities.As a result,children must need to balance both the aspects and enjoy the leisure time accordingly.
In addition,with the education and leaning,students allow to having fun and joy with their friends.This tendency might hep them to develop their imagination and enhance the ability of mind as practical knowledge is more important than theoretical.To illustrate,most of the famous scientist like Einstein was focusing and engaging on practical life rather than learning skills.
In contrast, other people hold the notion that children should engage with educational based activities which would help them to develop their cognitive and understanding skills.Besides, these activities would also help them to increase the level of communication skills.
To recapitulate, confessedly, educational activities may provide the chances of versatile development but in sharp contrast,other outdoor activities are more convenient and relaxing approach for the better development of child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70648464164 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43863388005 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.384847885 49.4020404114 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 334.4 106.682146367 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.6 20.7667163134 282% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123513765823 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680924403232 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292134368374 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680924403232 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292134368374 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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