Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Many people agree that the youngster should spend their free time on knowledgeable activities rather than involving in useless activities. I strongly disagree with the given statement because education is beyond the walls of a classroom and there are so many ways to obtain it.
Firstly, Education means to acquire exact knowledge on something from the reliable source , no matter that may be academic or non academic and the leisure time is that quality time when the youth exactly enjoys it by heart. Spare time not only entertain the children but it also boost the learning capacity of them. For example, there are some school rhymes like brush brush brush your teeth,which encourages the youth learning by playing. Moreover, people still have the impact of that rhyme even they are adult. Similarly, for most of the veteran celebrity, things like innate talent singing, dancing, caricature, and public speaking are the result of leisure time.
Secondly, free time not only refresh mood but it also motivates the children to be more creative. For example, a toddler who is passionate on cycling loves to explore new places furthermore, he is adventurous and creative and one day he will travel the whole world. It is said that a child who likes gardening during his leisure time take more care of the elders in his family.
In conclusion, Knowledge is an ocean and free time will direct you towards your real interest which may help you to reshape your career in future. It is a fruitful time to cherish the moment and learn.
- Internet technology means people no longer need to travel to foreign countries to understand how they live Do you agree or disagree 56
- As a result of advances in medical care average life expectancy is increasing for men and women Do you think most people will see this as a positive development What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society Support you 56
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 63
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...only entertain the children but it also boost the learning capacity of them. For exam...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: brush
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97794117647 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50591218162 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3597855843 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332664942724 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103049810961 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111118683616 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194764696545 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143091131083 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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