Few individuals consider that youngster should do only study relevant activities in their spare time or else it would be total time wastage. There are diverse views on this topic. However, I completely disagree with the statement and believe in a contractive manner. I would discuss my view in the following paragraphs.
First, I would like to begin with Sports. There are many sports game which helps the young individual to gain a lot more than just study relevant advantage. If I take Cricket as an instance, I would say cricket is the game that helps a group of young people to enhance their mental growth with their physical stamina. Sachin Tendulkar, who is wold famous cricketer, has started playing cricket in his extra time and he found cricket as his passion. If he has focused only on study relevant activity then he might have not achieved what he has accomplished at this time.
Second, many of younger population has caught into social media. Social media is completely out of study purpose, yet some of them are able to earn quite a lot of money from it. Also, youngsters are making social media their main source of income and leaving higher education because they are doing excellent without it, which they might not do with the future ahead in the study. Thus, restricting ourselves in study related environment could be detrimental to our future growth and opportunity.
To sum up, I would say by narrowing child's growth we would be restricting their personal development and providing limited opportunity. I do not believe that we should focus solely on education-related activities since other activities are as crucial as educational.
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- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 67
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a contractive manner" with adverb for "contractive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me and he found cricket as his passion. If he has focused only on study relevant a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, thus, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0071942446 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74143201829 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2921613331 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15253318066 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469458338504 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470439781817 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964216670135 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312751972995 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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