In the contemporary era, the children are not gave a prefrence in education but also they are doing leisure activities. Meanwhile, common people believe youngster other activities instruction otherwise they complete waste of time . Hence this essay find above notion to be absurd with logical views explained further.
To commence with though there are several example in ensuing paragraphs. Education is also important for the children.it is not required every young star is not clever in the education but the every children has a different different creativity. It Moreover ,some child is expert in art ,singing , dancing.for instance one of the famous singer which is nehakakkar she is 8th pass but she doing international concerts.
To elaborate the the sports is gave same importance to the education.some child profound interest in sorts.
For example , one of the our international cricketer who is Sachin Tendulkar he is 10 th pass but he became a international cricketer.
The education is very important for the children’s life.some society people believe that if the child do different activities is completely wastage of the time .However they are not concentrate in their education and the youngster gave that education is less important. Further more the child is poor in the basic concepts they very tuff survive in the higher education.
To conclude that education as well as other activities is most important in the children’s life .although more common people believe that children focus on only and only in the education background.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33198380567 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01447441522 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.22269769 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270798295077 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985161179393 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844764183631 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125705372218 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860797612347 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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