Today, human life and how to improve it is one of the greatest topics among people. However, a lot of things can affect human’s lifestyle negatively such as climate change and economy. In this short essay, I will elaborate how each of them can damage the way that people live terribly, and why I think the economy has more influence.
Although climate change impacts on human being’s life gradually, in most cases, they will last forever, namely global warming and desertification. In my country, Iran, due to changes in precipitation patterns in last few decades, deserts are growing extremely fast that means a lot of people have to leave their hometown forever, and immigrate to other areas to begin a new life. On the contrary, in some other areas, the high amount of rainfall has led to catastrophic floods that has damaged lots of lands and properties.
Nowadays, economy classify people in different groups in which they have to follow a certain lifestyle that will also affect their mindset. Of course, this classification is not rigid, and individuals can ascend or descend due to many external and internal reasons. Consequently, almost all people are involved with economical problems. For instance, many people have to work for extended hours to earn their living expenses. Also, every day, lots of people get laid off from their work or are at the risk of it. Hence, economical issues and thinking about how to manage them, is the main concern of all of us.
As a conclusion, although climate change’s impacts are irreversible and permanent on the way that people live, economy is the main anxiety of human being. It doesn’t matter in which economical level people are, they are always thinking about it. Besides, I believe, looking deep, climate change can be one of the greatest external reasons of economical problems. As a result, in my opinion, economy has the greatest impact on how mankind lives.
- TPO 55 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ly, almost all people are involved with economical problems. For instance, many people hav...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...r work or are at the risk of it. Hence, economical issues and thinking about how to manage...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...one of the greatest external reasons of economical problems. As a result, in my opinion, e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, look, so, as to, for instance, i think, of course, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96904024768 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67264981991 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9482086582 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224959449283 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727745984406 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419829656733 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142663814935 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509517941629 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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