Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience
It is believed by a number of people that preparing food at home is a time-consuming process. They think it better to purchase junk snacks as it seems appropriate to them to lead a tension-free life. This essay disagrees with this practice because junked substances create many health complications and homemade cuisine helps to concentrate on work properly.
Firstly, precooked food is the main culprit of health. That is to say, these types of eatable things are high in fat and other unwanted additives, which gives rise to some physical problems such as obesity, as a result, this aborts physical growth. Moreover, these things do not contain all nutrients in proper proportions, thus utilizing such a diet leaves the individuals undeveloped. My own nephew, for instance, eat burgers and pizzas on daily basis and is obese.
Secondly, cuisines cooked at home help to make the people more productive. A home-based meal is prepared according to the requirement of family members and is usually less spicy in nature that gives a proper satisfaction to eaters, and they can pay full attention to their work, which might not be possible in the case of peppery things as the addition of these spiced supplements divert the focus of individuals. For example, my brother is a shooter by profession, and his coach advises him not to eat snacks containing condiments to gain more accuracy in his work.
On balance, the trend of adopting outside cooked items is burgeoning these days. This essay suggests that habits cast an adverse effect on the holistic growth of a person and distract them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02264150943 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80152529273 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.557233952 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174287611683 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603101124544 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592738184151 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887019733358 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489693522919 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.