Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company, while others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Both elderly and young employees are equally important for a company. The young employees bring innovation and technology with them while the older ones bring wisdom and experience. In my view a balanced ratio of both old and young employees can turn out to be a great asset for any company or organisation.
The perks of having young employees is that they bring an innovation and a modern approach of handling tasks. In addition to innovation they are also well aware about the latest technology. Not only are they aware but are also well versed in its usage. They have a free hand at both gadgets and latest software. The older employees are not as computer friendly as the young ones. For instance a recent survey by the Indian Institute of Technology(Mumbai) shows that a great number of young people are aware of the latest technology as compare to the older generation.
It is not wrong to say that old employees are not equally efficient as the young ones. The wisdom that age brings with itself cannot be compared to the minds of young employees. Not only the wisdom but the experience that older employees have is a great virtue as well. In addition, with experience the older people are more familiar with the background or roots of the company. It is statistically proven that the older employees are more patient and focused as compared to the younger ones.
Hence, it is important that companies maintain a balance of their young and old employees. I believe that having older employees is better because they can be trained or informed about the latest technology but it is difficult to teach perseverance and determination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8829787234 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71682355423 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439716312057 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5443714778 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249830172465 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909704406374 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677359103577 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162310586455 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575302509153 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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