Many of the people have a notion that retired elderly people should be aided by the government while other have an opinion that people should save the money from the start of their career.In my opinion a person should have saving habit from the childhood to enjoy the retirement life rather than depending upon others.I am stating my view in below paragraphs
The main reason to hold this view is that by saving the money for later stage of life would always be beneficial. It will help the people to have a self confidence.Old people can enjoy their golden years of life by having their own fund. For instance: my grandparents opened a joint account when they got married.Then they started depositing few part of their earning on monthly basis.Now they are fully independent.They have sufficient funds to survive their life. They are not only catering basic need but travelling to different places as per their desire.Now they are living their life with self respect and confidence.
On the other hand if government will provide support to old people, it would add the financial burden on government .Instead of this, government can make use of this fund for some other productive purpose like providing subsidies and establishment of more hospitals in rural areas.. In addition to this government should make the tax rate low so that people can save more money. In this way saving habit culture will be promoted .
In conclusion, it is always better that young people should think of saving money from the start of their professional life but there should be a provision that if a person is in emergency then government should provide financial support to him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97446808511 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57823227657 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557446808511 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5380820228 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.125 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38177778652 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16634095928 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746730456224 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23650057017 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022782281079 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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