Some people believe that growing economy can be useful to those people who are poor and hungry. Others think that this can influence the environment.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many people are of the opinion that when the economic condition of a country improves the people who are poor and hungry will benefit immensely, their life standard will improve and feeding people will not be a challenge while some others believe an improvement in the economy can only bring negative impacts to the environment. Both sides of this argument will be discussed in this essay.
Improving the economic condition of a nation is a tough task for any government to achieve and the objective of this administration is to improve and alleviate the life of the poor and the needy in the society. It is an established fact that many poor people in the world earn less than a dollar daily, therefore most do not have foods on their table for themselves and their family.
Every leader of a nation has it as his or her mandate to grow the economy and implement policies that will benefit the people especially the poor in the society and such policies are those that have to do with job scope creation, subsidizing products, giving grants to farmers, student grants, giving scholarships and also to ensure that the rate of inflation is low.
As these policies are implemented to alleviate poverty this will also empower the people to contribute to the development of infrastructures and environment. It is therefore expected for a good leader to ensure that the people do not live destitute condition.
I will like to state an instance about how it is done in my country. Several Policies to alleviate the condition of the poor have been implemented, such policies like subsidising farm machines, fertilisers, giving grants to those that are aspiring to be entrepreneurs, providing commercial tricycles to men to earn a living. Many of these lives have been impacted positively without influencing the environment.
In conclusion, a nation whose people are poor and hungry do not have better and developed environment, the index for measuring the economy is by the standard of living and not by how well the environment is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ESTABLISHED_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'a fact'.
Suggestion: a fact
...oor and the needy in the society. It is an established fact that many poor people in the world earn...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...e do not live destitute condition. I will like to state an instance about how it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95918367347 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87252064437 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481049562682 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4671779019 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.636363636 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1818181818 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302899653257 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105458354474 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774092214936 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144832417688 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925104455713 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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