Due to unforeseen circumstances people are faced with tough circumstances which can be either due to financial issues or problems related to job. Some people argue that we have to accept these situations as a temporary phase while others are of an opinion that there should be a constant effort to snap out of these problems. In my opinion, working diligently and looking for viable solutions is the only way out of these troubles in life.
Employees often face this dilemma when they are not satisfied with their jobs but hesitate to work towards a change due to reasons such as fear of not getting a new job and landing up in a situation of financial instability. Because of these reasons they keep on working on the same job without trying to get a better job. However, there are situations where there is no other option but to accept the temporary phase of downturns. A classic example is economic recession where companies go bankrupt and lots of employees suffer job losses.
There is always an argument that there is no other way for overcoming these challenges other than genuine efforts and constant hard work. Employees can always look to acquire a new skill to grasp a better job or should not shy away from pursuing their passion. Even in times of an economic downturn people should focus on acquiring new certifications or degrees to build a strong resume, increasing the chances of getting a job when the economy improves.
Although there are some situations where it is nearly impossible to think of a solution yet constant and diligent effort can help in overcoming these times. In conclusion, its often easy to keep whining about a bad phase rather than working towards a better future.
- In some area of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion on this 67
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 56
- In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent Why do you think this is and what can be done about it 80
- People are surrounded by advertising which has increasing effect on our lives Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory ob or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your own opinion Write at least 250 words 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n a situation of financial instability. Because of these reasons they keep on working o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83673469388 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6399115954 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3423902344 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149692482547 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576746301789 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485210853732 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915822255394 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022182391791 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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