Some people have opinions that the best way to deal with bad situation are by accepting it. However, there is another perspective that states that attempting and improving those situations are the better way. I personally agree with both views, since each of them has positive benefit to our life.
In life, sometimes we have to bad situation, a situation where we never wish to happen. Consider an example, where a bachelor of accounting has a dream to work in the "Big 4 Consulting Companies". But, sadly he didn't get accepted by those favorable firms. He could react badly to this situation, but he chose to accept this condition, and doing his current job heartily, because he thinks that God has planned something beautiful for his life. As a consequence, he is always filled with joyful feeling that result to a boosted work performance.
On the other hand, accepting bad situation is not enough for us. For the example, after he finally could accept that bad situation that happened in his life, he still attempted to increase his current abilities. As a result, his increasing skills have made lot of big firms attracted to recruit him, including those "Big 4 Consulting Companies" that are on his dream list. And finally, he could be accepted by those favorable companies.
So in conclusion, I agree with both opinions. Because, each of those views has positive impacts for our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...nsulting Companies'. But, sadly he didnt get accepted by those favorable firms. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83988500767 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57805907173 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7311609702 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127022711959 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511181367709 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479985605034 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842356485947 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396829408958 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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