Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion
For any person, the job is always been a hot topic to care for because their career is reliable on it, a section of society thinks an individual should stick to one place of work for the entire tenure. Whereas, others having a different opinion of switching the jobs for better prospects in life. As per my point of view for future growth, it is important for an individual to alter their work.
Many of them start their career at the one company and ends also their just because of comfort- zone and do not want to struggle further in life. The obvious reason is over a period of time they have become masters in that one job and the security is also stronger compared to any new place. For example, an article from The Times of India, says that majority of them have gained a reputation at their workplace wherein they think a change might be risky and do not want to risk their settled life. Thus, this why people prefer to work at the same place till the end of their profession.
On the other hand, some of them would like to take challenges, since career has become monotonous for ambitious oriented by doing the same type of work. Additionally, for personal growth, they would not mind to take- up another job. For instance, according to Boston Consultancy Group on an average of 8 out of 10 people will have a preference of taking-up another job just because of the better pay package and for the title.
To conclude, people would alter their work according to their own choices and condition some stay at one place of work just because of the low-risk factor. In my view, people should take-up a chance for growth in careers such as better wages and position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...r in life. The obvious reason is over a period of time they have become masters in that one jo...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind taking'.
Suggestion: mind taking
...ly, for personal growth, they would not mind to take- up another job. For instance, accordin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e better pay package and for the title. To conclude, people would alter their wo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eers such as better wages and position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50657894737 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31973908111 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0829395067 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148520501633 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689247225428 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417521849539 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999232990495 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00994872861031 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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