Some people believe that it is the best to travel to foreign countries alone, while others prefer to go with people they know. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different opinions in regard to the question over whether to bring friends in international trips. While some people believe that it is better to make a journey without a company, others think that friends are compulsory part of every trip. The debate over this question seems to consist of two irreconcilable camps. Both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my own perspective is given.
From one point of view, it is certainly true that when you travel alone you have more possibilities to plan where to go and when you can do it. Therefore, you do not have to wait for friends or change the initial plans. In addition, when you make a journey by yourself without a company you can make new friends in a foreign country easily. For instance, there are always many people with similar interests and a chance to meet them is higher when you are alone.
From another perspective, travelling to another country is always potentially hazard and has potential problems. If you go with someone you know well, you will be assured that in case of emergency friends will support you. Not only is this helpful but it is also great when you realize that you are not alone. Also, journey with a company provides more chances to have fun. To be more precise, people are social beasts and the situation when they are surrounded by someone who they know well is a kind of vital requirement.
In conclusion, there are merits to both sides of the argument over whether to travel alone or with a company. After analyzing the question, my personal view is that every international trip should be made with friends or at least with people you know. This is because travelling is always potential dangerous and when you are not alone it is easy to have fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, you know, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68454258675 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54362762547 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0087484693 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202984324135 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675506724794 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536104932957 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131372201142 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259146457931 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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