Some people believe that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people think that having friends who all the time have the same viewpoint is better than have friends who may be disagreeing with them.
The first notion says that the person who have friends agree with him on any issue is having many advantages and disadvantages such as strength the relationship between friends and make the discussions with them logical, fair and quite. For example, I know two friends always agree with me on many discussions and I feel positively when I talk with, and I totally take their opinion on any problem face me.One of this opinion disadvantages is when any one might take an incorrect decision when he find all his friends the same point of view and he will feel puzzled.
On the other hand, there are some people believe that having friends did not agree with them is having many advantages and disadvantages, one of the advantages is known different types of thinking and this can help us choose the correct decision. One of the disadvantages is attributing some problems between them and that can make an week in the friendship, You can imagine yourself urge your friends and they had view against you, this can make me feel frustrated and cause some attributes with my friends , and may I lost my friends. For example in Egypt after the January Revolution many political discussions are happen and everyone had his opinion and he think that his opinion is the correct and other`s opinions are incorrect
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...int is better than have friends who may be disagreeing with them. The first notion says that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...disagreeing with them. The first notion says that the person who have friends ag...
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...trength the relationship between friends and make the discussions with them logic...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: QUIET_QUITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'quiet'? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
Suggestion: quiet
...discussions with them logical, fair and quite. For example, I know two friends always...
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Suggestion: One
...ke their opinion on any problem face me.One of this opinion disadvantages is when a...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...e of this opinion disadvantages is when any one might take an incorrect decision when ...
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Suggestion:
...any one might take an incorrect decision when he find all his friends the same p...
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Line 2, column 500, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...ght take an incorrect decision when he find all his friends the same point of view...
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Suggestion:
...take an incorrect decision when he find all his friends the same point of view a...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...problems between them and that can make an week in the friendship, You can imagine...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...nd cause some attributes with my friends , and may I lost my friends. For example ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...volution many political discussions are happen and everyone had his opinion and he thi...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...pen and everyone had his opinion and he think that his opinion is the correct and oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.808 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62012702629 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8808033967 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.333333333 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.6666666667 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443329612345 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231233695129 0.084324248473 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115532970281 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333702070013 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842088225719 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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