Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. In this era of information and technology, there is always a high demand for absorbing as much knowlege as possible. Thus it is controversial whether such data about science, business and acdemy should be available or not. both ideas have their own reasons, however, I believe that it would be more beneficial to spread these type of information globally. To begin with, such professional material will be extremely mean if it can be approached easily. Firstly, free information are great reference for undergraduate students as it is helpful to access and open their horizons related to their future profession. Besides, many students do not have adequate fund to do their own research in order to finish their findings, as a result, this is such a treasurable source for them. Secondly, if those academic information was not revealed, so many successfu inventions would not be existed now. For instance, Internet is the most invaluable discoveries in the world, therefore, if it was curbed strictly, the standard of living or the evolvement of the earth was standstill forever. By contrast, several kinds of information should be considered to be kept as a secret. The most important one is that sensitive information which affects directly on one country’s safety should be scrutinized before making them accessible. For example, for the sake of the maintaining global peace, developed countries always delimit scientific study about nuclear technology. The world would be on the verge of war and deterioration unless this sort of material is shared worldwide. In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are some types of hazardous information should not be unveiled due to politics of a nation. From my point of view, the more scientific information is revealed widely, the more equitable development of the world will be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people believe that it is good to share...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...absorbing as much knowlege as possible. Thus it is controversial whether such data a...
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Suggestion: Both
... and acdemy should be available or not. both ideas have their own reasons, however, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19411764706 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99868915998 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3003527731 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.882352941 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426726699119 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146761747122 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188501588358 0.0667982634062 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.426726699119 0.151304729494 282% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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