In present time the road related problems have exacerbated and rate of fatalities owning to the road accidents have increased immensely. This phenomenon of increasing road safety concerns have led to a debate among people. Some people believe that the only effective solution is to limit the speed of vehicles. However, others persist that there are other ways to obtain road safety.
To initiate with, over speeding is the major factor which contributes into road accidents and road casualties. By restricting the speed, the uncontrollable traffic issues can be minimized. This objective can be achieved by imposing rigid speed control rules. To exemplify, according to nation traffic control organization, the accidents on different highways in pakistan had increased mamifols due to over speeding vehicles rushing on highways. Therefore, speed related rules were devised and strict monetary fines and imprisonment over rash driving were imposed. These actions were highly contributive in eliminating traffic hazards. The speed surveillance by traffic wardens effectively caused 70% decrease in road fatalities.
On other hand, for effective and harmless traffic evacuation, controlling speed only cannot virtually help eliminate the problems owning to different negligences. To consider this aspect, it is important to scrutinise the experience as well as mental and physical fitness of people, before issuance of driving license.in addition to that , government should not allow huge and miscellaneous traffic on one road, however the heavy vehicles like lorries and trucks should use separate roads. For instance, federal government Islamabad, does not permit heavy traffic on motorway, this has substantially vpmtrubited in road safety and diminished road accidents to 96%.
To opinionate, the aggravating traffic situation on roads is calling for immediate and prompt actions. Only rules against over speeding cannot essentially deal the overwhelming safety problems on roads. Only experienced and medically for people must be allowed to drive on the roads.
To conclude, to ameliorate the hazards of traffic has made our roads more vulnerable, so the implementation of strict traffic rules is indispensable to set free our roads of devastating accidents.
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples 56
- Most societies have homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.To what extent do you agree? 67
- Some people believe limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety while other believe there are other ways to do this Discuss both views and give your opinion 63
- Some people believe limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety while other believe there are other ways to do this Discuss both views and give your opinion 68
- Most societies have homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.To what extent do you agree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72781065089 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99343614123 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1464347546 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2135273217 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764666522829 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760989375404 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120620523242 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810361016222 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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