Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today technology is playing crucial role in our society weather socially or economically. Although some people believe that the social interactions has been reduced by modern technology while some others are thinking that modern technology enhanced the social behavior of individuals. However, both the groups are right at some point of view but according to me technology definitely helps to improve social life a lot.
On the one hand, we have bunch of people who are in favor of new technologies. As we could see people around the globe, now could talk with their kith and kin with the help of different techniques, also able to work from any part of the world or order any thing online at your home with one click. Even though, inventions like, Bullet train, Plane, Metro and many others, made the journey too short and pleasant. People could board and meet their loved one anytime without hurdle which was not possible before. Many applications like, Whats app, Facebook and so on thru which people could stay connected with their friends, families, neighbors and so forth and could become more social as compare to past.
On the other hand, some sort of people who seems unpleasant with modern technology because, they believe that rather than being social person sometime they become more lonely with overusing of technology and may avoid talking and interacting with other people. Moreover, they also stop visiting or meeting people as they can talk from anywhere or order things online. As a result, no communication between two parties so alternatively it minimizes interaction.
As per my opinion, Modern technology undoubtedly enhancing the social behavior but same time some kind of limitation also needed as part of that so technology doesn't interfere as barrier in social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: anything
...ork from any part of the world or order any thing online at your home with one click. Eve...
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...ossible before. Many applications like, Whats app, Facebook and so on thru which peop...
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...alternatively it minimizes interaction. As per my opinion, Modern technology und...
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...so needed as part of that so technology doesnt interfere as barrier in social life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, kind of, sort of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16949152542 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58328661231 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0378880231 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328672924812 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113363600332 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14033904688 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22168525036 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140001437539 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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