Some people believe money is a less important factor than free time for quality of life. What other factors are necessary to live a good quality of lifestyle?
In this busy life with every activity being automated there should be something that can feed the inner soul so that it can enhance our life. Quite a few people consider that life is not all about money and it has less significance when it is compared with the leisure time that can improve the standard of life. This essay will talk about the various elements that are needed to have a better quality life.
Firstly, the most vital point that is a must, to have revised life is a healthy mind set. It can even be said that how healthy a mind is, that healthy a person will be. A healthy mind not only makes a person's thoughts better but also improves a person's behavior. Having a stronger mind set makes an individual to have a peaceful and soothful life. This can be reflected in many places in one's life, be it in the business or personal life. It makes the person to provide a revised solution to the problems. In order to have a refreshed and rejuvenated mind set, it is always necessary to have a better surrounding. A serene and green environment is all that is needed for the brain to make itself relax.
Secondly, the other central idea to lead a healthy life is to have a family. Living with relatives will always gives us enthusiasm to perform any task. This will keep us contented and satiated very often. In addition, family is also the signs of motivation, support and confidence. Whenever one's thinking gets deviated or in a dilemma as to decide which is better, the family can assist to pick up a good answer and that can even bring a successful outcome. Moreover, family makes us feel occupied and that devoids unwanted thoughts from our mind.
To recapitulate, there are a plethora of factors that need to be considered to have a better living. This essay pointed some of the key elements to achieve that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ons thoughts better but also improves a persons behavior. Having a stronger mind set ma...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...This can be reflected in many places in ones life, be it in the business or personal...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...mily. Living with relatives will always gives us enthusiasm to perform any task. This...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ave a better living. This essay pointed some of the key elements to achieve that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53776435045 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45733948726 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519637462236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4025066572 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0526315789 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125855380789 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371607877822 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390562109182 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794997526087 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411930087909 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.