It is irrefutable that sports play a vital role in individual's life . Different people have distinct mindset. It is believed by some people that one has to have inheritance ability to get success at sports,whereas other opine that one has to work hard and do more practice to expert at sport . However, in my opinion, Working hard could be got success at sports. This essay will cast light on both sights before making any final conclusion.
To commence with the first notion , there are myriad things to shared in the first statement. First and foremost is that natural ability can help once to get success in sports like they just need Minor strategy of sport and need less practice . As a result , those who pisses inherence ability , who can learn quick and get progress very fast . Besides this , they can boost their confidence and it helps to excel at sports. To exemplify, Kenya are born with athletic skills so they can easily win races due to natural skill.
However, other believe that working hard and more practicing is the proper way to get success in sports because practice is an integral part of sports . As a result, even person who have great desire to get success on particular sport and too much intriguing on sport, thus they can become successful at sports owing to the hard work . Although, no need for any skill on sport. Hence , people can get excellent at sports with practice and except any skills.
Having discuss arguments and counter arguments, I would like to infer that one has to consistently practice and work hard , rather than natural abilities to achieve goal in sports.
In conclusion, it can be said that as " every coin has two sides " , in the same manner, indicate varying opinion of people are imparetive and cannot be denied.
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 67
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 59
- Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to be successful at sports. Others believe that hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both sides and add your own opinion. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, whereas, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79804560261 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45910100126 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.462699014 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325083765554 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103082464347 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106152362859 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183677036841 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096062257208 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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