Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays. Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation?
Opinions are divided on why many people spend a large amount of money on the events like wedding and birthday parties. I believe that the main reason behind this is maintaining social status, and the solution lies in spreading awareness by various means.
Glorious events are hosted for the reasons related to making them memorable and to keep up with the Joneses. With regard to the former, marriages are considered to be the most important event of one's life, and to make it unforgettable one spends a lot of his fortune on it. For this reason, an individual hires a prominent wedding planner who helps one by various means, such as, finalizing a spectacular location, showcasing creative decorating ideas, and providing mouth-watering varieties of food. Turning to maintain social status, individuals flaunt their wealth and spend their hard-earned money on lavish invitation cards and expensive return gifts for the guests. By doing so, they go into debt or sometimes go bankrupt.
As for the solutions, the involvement of the government and celebrities could help to improve the causes mentioned above. As far as the government is concerned, they should circulate a notice or a bill stating the number of public gatherings in the events like marriages and birthday parties. Not only would this limit the number of guests, but it could also save many from going bankrupt. Celebrities could also play a vital role by spreading awareness through their real-life example. This could be achieved if they set an example of an economical marriage than a luxurious one. As a result of this, people get inspiration from their so-called role models and do not squander their torture on such events.
In conclusion, people spend their wealth to showcase their social status and go into debt. However, such causes could be alleviated by spreading awareness through celebrities and with the involvement of the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...dered to be the most important event of ones life, and to make it unforgettable one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14376996805 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78489809541 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7378611777 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107835407368 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375118597577 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377677654372 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772889176344 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321061380684 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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