Since the dawan of the time, man has thirsted for knowledge. This powerful force has fueled the ingenuity and the enterprise of humans who have been able to master thier skills, to create cities from the dust, to harness the the energy of rivers to bring light ot the night and water to the desert. The result of this ongoing march to the future is an incredible amount of inventions and tools that make our life brighter and more comfortable. Some claim that nowadays we have too many choices, pointing out that this could represent a disadvantge for us.
I believe we should be grateful to have such a variety of opportunities we can take advantage of. Generally speaking, having many choices available is definitely good news. This condition can be applied to several fields, from politics, to career to travelling. Apparently far from each other, we can enjoy all these aspects due to a common ingredient, which is actually the high number of choices we can make. For example, speaking of politics, the possibility of choosing a party or to nominate a candidate for the Senate, is the primary material to lay the foundations of a sound democracy. Once one said that freedom is the right to choose, the right to create for oneself the alternatives of choice.
Shifting from politics to the career world, we can see that having many possibilities allows graduate to choose the best job for them, the job they had been dreaming of for many years or the job that match with their passion.
In a world with no or few choices, life would be gloomer and harder, since people would not have the chance to taste freedom: the freedom to create their own future, to shape their lives and to explore the wolrd around them. In conclusion, I do not see any disadvantages in having a high numbers of choices ready for use, given that this condition gives us the possibility to have a fulfiiled existence.
- Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
- The increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement One alternative is that people start to work at a younger age Is this alternative a positive or negative development 47
- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work shopping and education To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individuals and teams is the reason for most sports achievements Others however think that mental attitude is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...create cities from the dust, to harness the the energy of rivers to bring light ot the ...
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Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...create cities from the dust, to harness the the energy of rivers to bring light ot the ...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...with their passion. In a world with no or few choices, life would be gloomer a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, if, so, for example, in conclusion, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70870870871 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60088840136 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0246835866 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227325649277 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079016989214 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075699463688 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128840670869 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305181317351 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.